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But that's was the liner notes said, at least as what I looked from."Dyna Mink played the keyboards, which were programmed by Goldie Foxx" Somehow I doubt that Goldie was responsible solely for programming the keyboards.I fixed most of the stuff, and I promise I'll keep up with this.I don't think this one's quite ready for GA status yet, but a little bit of work should bring it up to scratch. Added 和DITOR E tails 23:12, 13 November 2013 (UTC).Some of the online sources lack accessdates.Is there a category somewhere in Category:Singles by certification for the gold rating?.Done 和DITOR E tails 15:21, 16 November 2013 (UTC).Make sure it's clear in the citation that it's by Studio Killers.It's a primary source, by the official Studio Killers Beatport account, so at least it's reliable. Actually, I'm considering readding the Beatport.I'm keeping the .uk because that is not a self-published source. Beatport? .uk? Are these definitely reliable? Are these really the best sources out there?.There are good and featured song and album articles that have done this, and its just as fine here.I wouldn't bother listing the "Accolade" as such, but I do think it belongs in the reception section.That version did not chart, and I've rewrote this."and a version of the song played on the station was also released, which is also known as "This One's For Mama" version." How about "released as a separate single" rather than "also released"? Did that version chart at all?.Fixed 和DITOR E tails 23:02, 13 November 2013 (UTC)."The song reached number one on record charts in the Netherlands, such as" "Such as" implies examples why not just list them all (if you don't already)?.Added 和DITOR E tails 23:02, 13 November 2013 (UTC)."Bobby Rock and Pablo Rindt, Feng Shui, Niels van Gogh and Daniel Strauss, M-3ox, Lee Mortimer, and Fear of Tigers" Any wikilinks? Redlinks for those who are notable but don't yet have articles are fine.Since its a plot summary, do we need a source, cause typically good and featured film articles have plot summaries that don't have source? 和DITOR E tails 23:02, 13 November 2013 (UTC).Could we possibly have a summary of the music video? It doesn't need to be long.Rewritten 和DITOR E tails 23:02, 13 November 2013 (UTC).There are plenty of other examples of this- it's not a great way of writing. " noted its instrumentation of "skipping break beats" and synth loops." Personification.The members have not been identified, but I've fixed this already.Who set up the meeting? Did they seek out Cherry? Why "would be" formed, rather than "was"? "Without anyone to write lyrics for the song or release it, the two met Cherry for her to be vocalist and lyricist of the track, and the project Studio Killers would be formed." Who is Cherry? Also, "met Cherry for her" is a rather odd phrase.No source has stated the label or girl band name, so I don't know what to do about that. How about something like "Keyboardist Dyna Mink and DJ Goldie Foxx originally wrote the tune to "Ode to the Bouncer" for a UK girl band, who would be dropped from their label." What girl band? What label? "Dyna Mink and Goldie Foxx originally wrote the tune to "Ode to the Bouncer" for a UK girl band, who would be dropped from their label." Ok, this assumes more knowledge than the average reader actually has.You mention Bangladesh twice- are you sure you don't mean Belgium? Very different countries!.contribs) 20:15, 13 November 2013 (UTC) Ĭan't say I've ever heard of the band, but I'm happy to offer a review.